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War Poetry that I composed

Beautiful stories written by YOU about a person or event that changed your life, gave you hope, made you dream...
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Post by sucrez » December 18, 2009, 9:28 pm

A Thousand Leaves
A thousand leaves, as they lay
On the ground, like they may
A thousand years, as they pass
The thousand leaves, there they last
A thousand words, each’ve been spoken
A thousand vows, all have been broken
A thousand leaves, as they fell
A thousand lives, ready to sell
A thousand corpses, badly scattered
A thousand hearts, cruelly shattered
A thousand dead, all have been slain
And there the thousand leaves remain

And so,
A thousand leaves, as they lay
On the ground like they may.
Real girls aren't perfect, and Perfect girls aren't real.
Sucrez x.

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Post by ladybird » December 18, 2009, 9:40 pm

Dear (((((sucrez)))))

Mega thanx for sharing your war poem...it is stirring to the senses and has an intensity and flow that is most engaging...

Welcome to the Peak!!! :)

love & blessings
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Post by sucrez » December 18, 2009, 10:36 pm

ehheh thank you Ladybirdd!!! :D
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Sucrez x.

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Post by mwzephyr » December 21, 2009, 4:12 am

Ironic; it reminds me in a way of the buried terra cotta soldiers in the tombs, many shattered and in disarray...
were they always terra cotta, shells of clay not unlike our own?

~*~*~~~~~~*~*
The transience of life, floats upon the moment of conciousness,
like the seeds of a dandelion upon the wind;
its value and its worth in determined by the the goals of perminance,
or
the goals of dust?

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Post by sucrez » December 21, 2009, 4:24 am

right yeahh the terra cottas. well it could be all, you never know ;) goals of dust.....goals of anything; something; or altogether nothing? It could be whatever you want it to be and mean :^
Real girls aren't perfect, and Perfect girls aren't real.
Sucrez x.

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Post by Yoron » December 24, 2009, 2:51 pm

I don't know man.

In Japan they have the cherry blossoms.

They go there to see them fall. Every season.

It's life's.

And they have this tradition to put candles inside a little 'boat' putting them to sea. Maybe you too need to do that, to let them go.

Life can be horrible at times, and the memories may never leave us.
But you need to let it go.

There is a future, always. As long as you trust in it.
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Post by sucrez » December 25, 2009, 12:26 am

yeeeeeeeeeeahh suree i knoww...in japan
coz i AM in japan!! loooool... :D
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Sucrez x.

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Post by Yoron » December 26, 2009, 8:58 am

Interesting?
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Post by olivia751 » December 30, 2009, 2:51 am

Hello,

Its a lovely poem. It remind me the soldiers and many other person who had died in a war.
Thanks for the poem..



Regards,
Olivia



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