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Post by poddarku » March 15, 2008, 4:10 am

Rain rain
''''''''''''''''''''''
Mother told her to save them for rainy days.
The rain drops on the future this noon.
This noon of annihilated sun.

And, this day she breaks her piggy bank.
Opened, a note from a distant land
With roaming nomads of memory
Flies out. It flies to and fro, settles
On the dust over a black book case.

A currency it is, to be cashed
In a different plain, in a world
With strange lights and figures of the past.
A sepia lane and lame cat crossing…
A sparrow touched by death
A motherly hand placed on her head.


Mother told her to save them for rainy days
clever talks delay friendship

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Post by Liebestraum » March 15, 2008, 10:38 am

Beautifully intense and poignant!

You create such incredibly vivid atmospheres.

Love,
Margherita :)
Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love.
(Rumi)

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Post by LadySolaris » March 15, 2008, 3:42 pm

A sepia lane... Such strength and power in such simple description. Thank you!

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Post by summerrain » March 19, 2008, 3:32 pm

;)
Life is like a coin,
You can spend it any way you wish,
but you can spend it only once"

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Post by brooke » March 20, 2008, 6:56 pm

oh
i love this
its beautiful the way it tells a story
wonderfulness my dear :xmas: :D:
"Let your speech always be gracious, seasoned with salt, so that you know how to respond to each one"-Colossians 4:6

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