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Dawn with you (haiku)

They say a poem's not really a poem until you share it with someone else. And that's what this place is all about.
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Post by Liebestraum » March 18, 2008, 3:53 am

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Dawn stirs in love's skies

as each other's sun we rise

blushing horizons
Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love.
(Rumi)

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Post by LadySolaris » March 18, 2008, 7:45 am

Simply dawning ;)

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Post by summerrain » March 18, 2008, 4:45 pm

GORGEOUS! the words & picture both alike ;)
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Post by Morning Bear » March 18, 2008, 6:29 pm

I love good Haiku
it brings emotions pouring
with very few words

luv Morning Bear
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Post by ladybird » March 18, 2008, 9:31 pm

Dearest (((Margherita))),

...Stunning....both the words and pic what a delightful combo!!!

...mega thanx for sharing this sweet gem!!!

love from a blissed
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Post by Lion~* » March 18, 2008, 9:56 pm

Absolutely lovely...
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Post by Liebestraum » March 18, 2008, 11:47 pm

Thank you all from my heart for your loving replies.

I want to add that the picture is Rassouli's "Bringer of Dawn", I think it is a fantastic painting. I used it a few years ago already once to accompany my poem "The Bringer of Dawn", which is about my hometown. I feel like sharing it here once again, as it fits in:


* * *

The Bringer of Dawn

* * *


In the silent embrace of dormant streets
I move in big strides of playful lightness.
Amazed at my effortless speed and grace
I absorb the whispers of familiar walls
while the fresh breeze caresses my face.

I am on friendly ground in my hometown
and I know here I can find what I seek.
The roots tracing me back to the Source
are anchored between these stones.
I can connect with Heaven in this spot,
the sparkling stars perform magical rites
and mysteries unveil during the night.
On this blessed soil I am complete
I am the mother, the daughter, the child.
And I am also the Bringer of Dawn.

Darkness calls me with a silent sigh,
I have no fear for I know the Light.
Upon the hill surrounded by trees
I lift my arms in a revered reach,
my heart opens wide in deepest praise.
Behind me the nightly sky recedes
in sweet surrender to the rising sun.
I am the Bringer of Dawn.

Then I watch the quiet world emerge
into the golden embrace of the day.
I have this sweet secret bond of love
that ties my heart and soul to God.
In this place where I was born,
I come to dance with the Angels.
They open my eyes to the wonder
of this Earth and of Universe.
They let me share in Creation.
That’s why in this divine dream
in union with the spirit of Home
I am the Bringer of Dawn.

* * *


Love to all and have a wonderful new day.

Margherita :)
Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love.
(Rumi)

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