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In The Commotion...

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LadySolaris
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Post by LadySolaris » May 31, 2008, 2:07 am

Next to me, on me
Among my desires
You sinuously move

You hear me breathe
You sustain kissing me
Your hear me cry out

You cannot stop
I belong to you
I let myself be held

In the commotion…

I awaken suddenly
The sun is high in the sky
I have to rise
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Post by Morning Bear » May 31, 2008, 7:05 am

OOOOh - Dreams like that make the day come alive.

Very expressive writing Lady S.
The drama and excitement and then back to life - it's so realistic.
Love and Blessings,

Zane
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Post by Luckintheshadows » June 1, 2008, 11:17 am

WOW! Lady S....absolutely sparkling, I love the imagery, and the whole aliveness of this poem....so sensual, what an incredible way to wake up!

*hugs*

Luck.
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Post by Liebestraum » June 2, 2008, 7:34 am

Such liveliness in this dream. Why dreams sometimes seem better than reality is a mystery and a pity, we really should live more fully, that's the lesson, but we always build walls around our desires of freedom and joy ...

Very intense write, enjoyed it much, dear Solaris.

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Margherita :)
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I am mastered totally by Love.
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