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I Just Let Go

They say a poem's not really a poem until you share it with someone else. And that's what this place is all about.
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Luckintheshadows
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Post by Luckintheshadows » June 7, 2008, 9:51 am

The edge is digging
Into my finger tips
The memory of you
Lingers on my lips.

The gaping chasm yawns
A starving abyss
And I still remember
The taste of your kiss.

My arms are growing numb
My fingers are going to break
But the memory of you
Still makes me want and ache.

I know I'm going to fall
It's just a matter of when
Your whispers caress my fevered mind
And I remember how it was, back then.

As we lie together in silken darkness
No need for words we both know
When is now, no more holding on
So, I just let go.
That's the difference between me and the rest of the world! Happiness isn't good enough for me! I demand euphoria! - Calvin and Hobbs

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Post by Sparky » June 7, 2008, 4:04 pm

I looooove this, Luck. So passionate, yet, a slight feeling of pause. Excellent. It sounds like it should be lyrics to a song.

Love,
Barbie

P.S. I love your anime.
Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadows.

~ Helen Keller

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Post by LadySolaris » June 7, 2008, 9:17 pm

I agree with Barbie, would make a great song. Yes, it is a wonderful writ, soulful, mournful, hopeful.

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Post by ladybird » June 8, 2008, 11:44 pm

WOW!!!!

Dear ((((((Luck))))))

...to me your poetry is both surreal and sublime and very emotionally charged...it evokes much drama!!!

mega thanx for sharing a captivating read as always!!!

love ladybird luv

P.S I too love your anime!!
Sunshine surrounds the earth as love surrounds our souls. ~Amethyst Snow-Rivers

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