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Little Child

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Post by sam » June 12, 2008, 10:41 pm

Little child

Little child do not cry
And forget those things that make you high.
Life is challenge that you must face
Gather your strength and finish the race.

Little child do not fear
There are those that hold you dear.
They may not be family in name
But they love you just the same.

Little child do not give in to anger
Or you will place yourself in danger.
Listen to the words of those that care
And all tribulations you will successfully bare.

Little child do not weep
Close your eyes and go to sleep.
Dream of a brighter tomorrow
And forget all your deep-seated sorrow.

Little child forget your troubled rage
Learn to grow and turn the page.
An angel will come to wipe your tear
Look around for she is near.

Little child learn to fly
Muster your courage and attempt to try.
Your future is waiting in the distance
This life you live need not be a prison sentence.

Little child now you have learnt
The walls of the past you have burnt.
You conquered your demons that lurked in the shadows
Happiness and success are sure to follow.
You’ve let go of all that hurt
You are no longer someone else’s dirt.

Grow strong and continue to fight
You will go well into the night.
Remember, to succeed you must rage
Flip the script and turn your life’s page…

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Morning Bear
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Post by Morning Bear » June 13, 2008, 1:07 pm

SAM,
welcome to the IP forums and IP.

Your poem is enjoyable and gives a message of hope and common sense for even an adult child :0: .
Peace and Blessings,

Morning Bear
For me to believe in you doesn't require that you believe in me,...it only simply requires that you know and thus become all that you are meant to be. MB

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Liebestraum
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Post by Liebestraum » June 13, 2008, 4:41 pm

Little child do not fear
There are those that hold you dear.
They may not be family in name
But they love you just the same.
Very lovely, like a lullaby.

Welcome to the Peak!

Love,
Margherita
Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love.
(Rumi)

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Hollyberry
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Post by Hollyberry » June 13, 2008, 9:35 pm

Sam,
This is so beautiful. So full of wisdom, hope, and love, I like that. Many great lines but I especially love

Little child forget your troubled rage
Learn to grow and turn the page.
An angel will come to wipe your tear
Look around for she is near.


Thank you for sharing.

Welcome to the 'Peak!

Holly
"Where there is great love, there are always miracles."

~Willa Cather

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Post by LadySolaris » June 19, 2008, 10:30 pm

A warm welcome to you, Sam. Truly a beautiful piece of poetry. Simple and powerful.
Grow strong and continue to fight
You will go well into the night.
Remember, to succeed you must rage
Flip the script and turn your life’s page…
Direction is forward, always forward.

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