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Post by Luckintheshadows » September 19, 2008, 9:23 am

Time spun out into
fragmented moments.
Glittering shards depicting
memories and thoughts.
I watch you dream,
asleep with your demons
and the ashes of torment
drift across your soul
driven by dying winds.

In the stillness of the night
I watch your heart beat,
heavy cadence, dancing sedately
within nightmare's court.
A sweet smile lingers,
tugging playfully at your lips
and I know you were
just waiting for this moment
to be free.

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Post by revdcb » September 19, 2008, 9:52 am

Simply beautifull. revdcb

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Post by Lion~* » September 19, 2008, 12:08 pm

What you write strikes deeply within me. People's details differ, but oh how the emotional content of certain lives resounds in unison!

Thank you again for pouring out your soul's voice, ((((Luck))))
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Post by copy, write free » September 19, 2008, 3:45 pm

I must say, that it seems you were writing directly to me on behalf of my wife. so many of your words match in essence what she tells me some mornings.

remarkable

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Post by Liebestraum » September 21, 2008, 9:25 am

Oh yes, I can relate to this too. Perfect rendering of familiar nightly events behind closed eyes.

Very well done.

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Margherita :)
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Post by shortsleeves » September 22, 2008, 5:51 am

A beautiful conversation with your inner consciousness Luck.
Love,
Hal
Hal

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Post by Maithri » September 23, 2008, 11:35 pm

I just love the way you write my friend,

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Post by Hollyberry » September 24, 2008, 8:58 am

You capture the moment so well. I, too, like the way you write.

Thanks for sharing.

Holly :)
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Post by Luckintheshadows » September 24, 2008, 9:41 am

(((HUGS)))..Thank you all for your wonderful comments luv

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Post by Mammy » September 27, 2008, 2:08 am

I agree - you write so expressively :) :) :)

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