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Inspiration Peak Forums • Inhale/Exhale
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Posted: September 28, 2008, 9:43 am
by Luckintheshadows
***Author Notes*** The horrible grammatical errors are there on purpose as I thought they fitted the poem. Also, I don't really know where it came from, but it's been sitting inside me for a long time, and there's such a wonderful feeling of relief now that it's out.:)

Inhale these toxic whims,
burning my dreams
leaving only ashes
where my heart used to be.
But I don't mind,
'Coz the rain is gonna come
my hopes I'm gonna find
and the tapestry will be done.
Exhale these faithless words,
casting doubt away
leaving behind dellusion
where the dreams used to be.
But I don't care
'Coz soon the sun will rise
I'll remember how to dare
and cast aside your threads 'n lies.
Inhale your poison promises
scorching holes inside my skin
leaving scars upon my soul
and lesions to fray my sanity.
But baby it's all good
'Coz soon I won't be here
and you're gonna wish you could
give up the world to keep me near.
Exhale this twisted fantasy
of you, and me, and them
I got no patience left for it
and the faded pages crumble.
So say bye, baby bye
'Coz it's time for us to die
our souls say it's time to leave
we've got new passions now to weave
and in the greying of the day
there's just nothing left to say.

Posted: September 29, 2008, 12:46 am
by Maithri
And the phoenix rises,

The little flowers bloom,

And love
and luck

remain untouched by the fire...

Your words are perfect, as always.

Thank you my friend, M

Posted: September 29, 2008, 6:39 am
by sam
glorious poem, enjoyed thsi very much

Posted: September 30, 2008, 5:41 am
by fredcowie
Oh my, such sweet sorrow.

Posted: September 30, 2008, 8:59 am
by Liebestraum
Dear Luck, your words are passionately pointing into the direction of faith in yourself, in the future, in Universe working for your highest good.

A powerful write. You stand tall upon the debris of the past, ready to move on with new energy.

It's very well done!


Posted: September 30, 2008, 9:07 am
by Luckintheshadows
luv ***hugs*** Thank you all for your wonderful comments! :)