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The Little Dream and Hope
- Luckintheshadows
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A little dream stood apart,
away from the crowd,
trying to mend her broken heart
while crying long and loud.
And the crowd, they couldn't see
her tears, or hear her desperate sobs,
so intent they were on equality
as is the way with mindless mobs.
The little dream pricked her fingers
trying to thread the needle's eye
still a stain, the crimson lingers
she can't stop crying, though she does try.
And the crowd are still oblivious
to the little dreams plight
their sheepskins look so ridiculous
beneath the harsh fluorescent light.
Then Hope came to stand apart,
"Don't cry anymore little dream," he said
gathering the pieces of her broken heart,
"You can share mine instead."
He offered her with smiles and grace,
helped to thread the needle's eye
wiped the tear stains from her face
and she shakily asked him "Why?"
"Because," he said in conspiring tone,
"You and I are so very rare,
it's not right that we should stand alone
when together we make such a beautiful pair."
away from the crowd,
trying to mend her broken heart
while crying long and loud.
And the crowd, they couldn't see
her tears, or hear her desperate sobs,
so intent they were on equality
as is the way with mindless mobs.
The little dream pricked her fingers
trying to thread the needle's eye
still a stain, the crimson lingers
she can't stop crying, though she does try.
And the crowd are still oblivious
to the little dreams plight
their sheepskins look so ridiculous
beneath the harsh fluorescent light.
Then Hope came to stand apart,
"Don't cry anymore little dream," he said
gathering the pieces of her broken heart,
"You can share mine instead."
He offered her with smiles and grace,
helped to thread the needle's eye
wiped the tear stains from her face
and she shakily asked him "Why?"
"Because," he said in conspiring tone,
"You and I are so very rare,
it's not right that we should stand alone
when together we make such a beautiful pair."
That's the difference between me and the rest of the world! Happiness isn't good enough for me! I demand euphoria! - Calvin and Hobbs
Little dream should find hope within. When people say "Have a nice day!" respond, "We have to make our own 'nice days.' Just waiting for one to come along is crazy."
Frederick J. Cowie, Ph.D. Please visit my website at fredcowie.com, my FACEBOOK(/fredcowie) page where I post my writings and my paintings every day. Peace!
- Hollyberry
- Beautiful Soul
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Very lovely.
Thanks for sharing this.
Holly
Thanks for sharing this.
Holly

"Where there is great love, there are always miracles."
~Willa Cather
~Willa Cather
- Morning Bear
- Beautiful Soul
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A very excellent poem Luck.
Beautiful evolution of the situation and the climax.
Thanks for the inspiring thoughts.
Zane
Beautiful evolution of the situation and the climax.
Thanks for the inspiring thoughts.
Zane
For me to believe in you doesn't require that you believe in me,...it only simply requires that you know and thus become all that you are meant to be. MB
- Liebestraum
- Cosmic Dreamer
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A very lovely and creative work, dear Luck. And with a great message of love and hope.
Enjoyed this much.
Love,
Margherita
Enjoyed this much.
Love,
Margherita

Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love.
(Rumi)
I am mastered totally by Love.
(Rumi)
- Ron Atchison
- Inspiration Peak
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I love the way you bring this to a close Luck... indeed, we are even more beautiful when we walk and sing and dance and dream together.
With every best wish,
Ron
With every best wish,
Ron
- Luckintheshadows
- Beautiful Soul
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Blessings,
Luck.
That's the difference between me and the rest of the world! Happiness isn't good enough for me! I demand euphoria! - Calvin and Hobbs
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- Beautiful Soul
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I enjoyed this reunion of consciousness Luck. Very creative work. Love,
Hal
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