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Your gaze

They say a poem's not really a poem until you share it with someone else. And that's what this place is all about.
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Post by Liebestraum » January 3, 2009, 5:20 pm

Image





Your gaze


Towards you I walk,
my arms outstretched
like branches of a tree
embarrassed by its
wintery nakedness.

But your summer gaze
lingers on the whole of me,
digging deep through
all of my defensive layers.
You stir me out of slumber
and wash a spring tune over me.

You say hi to my every cell,
without uttering a sound.
I respond and move closer
dressed in languid buoyancy.
Your eyes reflect the colors
of all of my seasons at once.

I surprise you then
as I decide to bloom
in the middle of winter,
allowing your sun gaze
to quickly melt away
all the residues of ice
that kept my frozen dreams
from being realized.









Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love.
(Rumi)

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Post by Morning Bear » January 3, 2009, 5:48 pm

Margherita,
This is Exquisitely Beautiful.
I think your words could melt the coldest heart in the most isolated glacier ever created.
After that attempt at explaining how precious this poem is - All else leaves me now speechless.
Love and forever blessings,

Zane
For me to believe in you doesn't require that you believe in me,...it only simply requires that you know and thus become all that you are meant to be. MB

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Post by shortsleeves » January 4, 2009, 9:37 am

More beautiful expression from your beautiful consciousness.
Love,
Hal
Hal

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Post by Liebestraum » January 4, 2009, 2:07 pm

Thank you, dear Zane and dear Hal, for your most loving replies!

Have a nice Sunday evening!

Love and joy.
Margherita
Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love.
(Rumi)

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Post by Lion~* » January 13, 2009, 1:41 am

Gaspingly Beautiful!!!!!! luv I so KNOW this feeling !!!

((((Margherita)))))
Fill your paper with the breathings of your heart...William Wordsworth

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Post by lupinelinda » January 16, 2009, 12:48 pm

Oh Dear, Margherita...this is truly beautiful and, like "lion" I also know this amazing feeling.

Thank you for sharing the beauty of your heart and soul!

Love, Linda

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Post by ladybird » January 17, 2009, 6:12 pm

Dearest ((((((Margherita))))))

...your poem is so intense and has a captivating beauty about it...

...the imagery is supurrrrb sweet friend...and I love the picture too...

Mega thanx for sharing a truly glorious gem... :)

love from a blissed
ladybird luv
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Post by Space » January 27, 2009, 8:08 am

Flipy said MIAUUUU (it must be traslated as WOW!)
He love it!!! .. so doI!
luv
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Post by Liebestraum » February 5, 2009, 11:00 am

Thank you, dear Janice, dear Linda, dear ladybird and dear Virginia, for your sweet replies.

Allow me to express my joy for discovering that our dear Virginia has peeked in. What a lovely new picture! Please visit more often, we love you!

Love and hugs to all.
Margherita luv
Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love.
(Rumi)

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Post by Shalini » February 6, 2009, 7:29 pm

That is so touching and enveloping in its warmth - and the picture fits the beautiful poem and its sentiments perfectly - thank you dear Margherita for sharing this emotion!
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