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Liebestraum
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Post by Liebestraum » March 29, 2009, 3:02 pm

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Fingers playing soul notes


No purer water
than your river of life
will ever cross my forest.
With every kiss
you carry buckets
of milk and honey
and pour them
over my thirsty valleys
and lonely hills.

I remember
your fingerprints
from ages ago,
when we were dressed
in white innocence
on other shores of bliss.
Where the stars
shone brighter
than anywhere else.

Deep desire
traveled across time
and space
to manifest once again.
Now your eyes
flash a secret code
into my consciousness.
The keynote message
pierces my caution
and dissolves
my shyness.

I let my emotions
somersault
on the lawn of your
enchantment
and come to a halt
right there
where you wait
for my fingers
to touch your soul.

Where our oceans
flow into each other
and where the sun
plays with the stitch less
seam marking it
with diamonds,
as a reminder
of what this love
offers the sky
when it is bold enough
to express its
full potential,

no less than
divine perfection.






Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love.
(Rumi)

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Space
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Post by Space » March 29, 2009, 3:41 pm

Lovely ... as you are!
con amor
Virginia

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Post by Morning Bear » March 29, 2009, 6:05 pm

So tell me Dearest Margherita -
Have you made plans to publish a book of all your beautiful love poems? luv
Your work is divine - touching both human and spiritual plains, and the world needs your words to lift it up and make it spin gloriously.
Love and deepest blessings in all ways,

Zane
For me to believe in you doesn't require that you believe in me,...it only simply requires that you know and thus become all that you are meant to be. MB

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Post by ladybird » March 29, 2009, 11:22 pm

Dearest ((((((Margherita))))))

I agree with Zane....you really should publish your love poetry...
its supurrrrrrb!!!

I love the picture too...beautiful!!!

love from a blissed
ladybird luv
Sunshine surrounds the earth as love surrounds our souls. ~Amethyst Snow-Rivers

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Post by Liebestraum » April 8, 2009, 5:30 am

Thank you, dear Vir, dear Zane and dear ladybird, for your most loving replies and encouragements.

I am rather busy right now, but I will give it some thought.

Love and hugs.
Margherita luv
Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love.
(Rumi)

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Post by mwzephyr » April 21, 2009, 8:20 am

Margherita,
That is one of the most beautiful and moving poems I have ever read. My eyes well up with tears just now and I feel the electricity of your inspiration.
Thank you for sharing this poem with us.
Dave

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Post by Lion~* » April 22, 2009, 10:01 am

(((((Margherita)))))) You are a stunning love poetess!
Fill your paper with the breathings of your heart...William Wordsworth

Follow your honest convictions, and stay strong. - William Thackeray

The bottom line, especially for my character,
is the issue of unconditional love.”
Matthew Weeden

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Post by Liebestraum » April 27, 2009, 3:28 am

Dear Dave and dear Janice, thank you both for your most generous and loving replies.
You warm my heart.

Love,
Margherita :)
Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love.
(Rumi)

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Post by nia » June 1, 2009, 1:24 am

Dear Margherita,

How beautifully touches my day, my humble day! Thank you,
it was a wonderful reading, you are great! I agree about published book! You should think of this,

Blessing and Happiness,
with my love,
nia
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Post by Zanneta » June 1, 2009, 4:30 pm

Your words are so very moving.
Absolutely beautiful. :)
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Blessings
Christi crux est mea lux.

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