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Inspiration Peak Forums • Healing whispers of reality
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Healing whispers of reality

Posted: October 8, 2009, 4:02 pm
by Liebestraum
Leonardo da Vinci "Woman's Head"

* * *

Healing whispers of reality

* * *

Dawn’s pink cheeks
leaned warm onto my eyes
causing me to sigh.
A veil of melancholy
clung to my thoughts
like a shred of morning fog
entangled in willow boughs.

Quietly you came to me
with whispers of reality
to lift my chin so caringly.
A few tears fell and gathered
within the palms of your hands,
where they froze into crystal beads
eternalized by your sidereal gaze.

I wear them now linked together
by the unalterable wire of our love.
Their light reverberates in our eyes
to eternally symbolize
the oneness of our hearts
even though at times
we roam around different stars.

Our inner senses will always show
the right way leading back home
to enjoy the fruits of our own Eden
in the sweetest awareness of our souls.

* * *

Posted: October 9, 2009, 12:54 pm
by Lion~*
This is so intensely beautiful it made me stop breathing...

love Janice

Posted: October 9, 2009, 1:03 pm
by Liebestraum
Dear ((((Janice)))), thank you so much for taking the time to read and to comment so lovingly!

Love and hugs.
Margherita :)

Posted: October 9, 2009, 3:46 pm
by ladybird
Dearest (((((Margherita))))))

Gorgeous poem....such beautiful imagery...indeed breathtaking...

mega thanx for sharing!

love from a blissed
ladybird luv

Posted: October 9, 2009, 6:41 pm
by Space
Ahhhh ... what a Poetess do we have here, eh?
Gentle Mar----> gentle poems!
Te quiero mucho

Posted: October 23, 2009, 5:52 am
by Liebestraum
Thank you so much, dear ladybird and dear Virginia, for reading and commenting so lovingly.

Love and hugs.
Margherita luv

Posted: October 27, 2009, 5:03 pm
by nia
My Dear Margherita, you can't imagine how beautifully hits my humble night now your poetical touches... You are the painter of poetry world. How nicely you weaved the feelings... This is almost healing for our souls, and how I need to hear this. Captured my mind, well expressed. I loved it Margherita, thank you,

with my love,

Posted: October 27, 2009, 8:12 pm
by Laura Sue
I felt a hush come over me while reading this pure, beautiful word creation.

Thank you

Posted: October 30, 2009, 2:26 pm
by Liebestraum
Once again, thank you, dear Nia and dear Laura Sue, for your most kind comments on my words.

Margherita :)