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Visions of You

They say a poem's not really a poem until you share it with someone else. And that's what this place is all about.
Beautiful Soul
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Post by STAReye » October 20, 2012, 11:46 pm

Like a mirage
in the distant horizon
across blue undulating sea
you rise and fall
heaving with tidal waves
your hands flailing
as if a final goodbye
is all that matters
or as if you were waving
in a beckoning motion
egging me to come
to your rescue
but I keep my distance
only watching
only seeing
only imaging
the snarl of hope
growling illimitable sounds
as I begin to lose
visions of you.

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Everything In Moderation
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Location: Canada

Post by Lion~* » October 23, 2012, 11:31 pm

Is this ever powerful..... < takes deep breath in>
Fill your paper with the breathings of your heart...William Wordsworth

Follow your honest convictions, and stay strong. - William Thackeray

The bottom line, especially for my character,
is the issue of unconditional love.”
Matthew Weeden

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Beautiful Soul
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Joined: February 6, 2009, 4:28 pm
Location: New England, USA

Post by jjbreunig3 » October 25, 2012, 4:16 am

An enjoyable and swell piece; loved the imagery and poetic flow; another romantic has been lost at sea; wonderfully written!

-Joe Breunig
Reaching Towards His Unbounded Glory
A Journey Of... Poetic Purpose
Logic, when applied to people, fails miserably. --Joseph J. Breunig 3rd

Beautiful Soul
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Post by mwzephyr » June 17, 2014, 10:55 pm

I admit I just found this gem you wrote. I fell in love with it the minute I read it!
Thank you.

Beautiful Soul
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Location: Islandia, NY

Post by Davidf » June 18, 2014, 2:26 pm

Really liked this. Thanks to Zep for bringing it back up to the top!
Have a blessed day!

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