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Fallen

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Post by Luckintheshadows » June 2, 2007, 5:20 am

Crimson raindrops fall from heaven
Splashing into obsidian pools
Such are the tears of angels
Who didnt play by the rules.

"But rules are made to be broken!"
They cried out in anguished pain
"You never said we couldn't!" they accused
As their tears mingled with the falling rain.

Thrown, they were, like broken toys
Into the darkest depths of hell
Condemned to eternity in physical labour
So sounds the judgement bell.

Their pitiful cries, no longer heard
And their tears continue to fall
Humbled in their magnificent beauty
No hearts can hear their call.

Never forgotten, their crimes unwritten
Not known by those so young
No whispered in pass on storm lashed nights
Names removed from songs never sung.
That's the difference between me and the rest of the world! Happiness isn't good enough for me! I demand euphoria! - Calvin and Hobbs
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Post by Raghav » June 4, 2007, 6:09 am

Names removed from songs never sung.
it was a nice reading... i loved your poem... title "fallen" was also very nice... it invited me to read your poem... I loved the last line also...

long words put short.... an absolute fine piece of poetry...

keep writing and sharing...
bye and take care...
There are words that must be said, there are words that must be heard... There is meaning to the words I say!

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