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Trust (tetractys poem)

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STAReye
Beautiful Soul
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Location: Brampton,Ontario CA

Post by STAReye » August 19, 2014, 12:24 am

Trust
sometimes
becomes so
imbued with fear
rupture may never let you be the same.

At times trust becomes worn off like bruised skin
hurts the ego
rips your mind
body
soul.

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Lion~*
Everything In Moderation
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Joined: February 2, 2004, 1:52 pm
Location: Canada

Post by Lion~* » August 19, 2014, 9:54 am

Your write caused one of my own to blast through my brain! Thanks Leonard!


Trust
recognizes
dishonest tales
lined up disguised
to fool the kindest soul lavishing love.


Sometimes trust is broken to irreparable depths
any truth given
becomes fuel
burnt to
ash.



Lion~*
Fill your paper with the breathings of your heart...William Wordsworth

Follow your honest convictions, and stay strong. - William Thackeray

The bottom line, especially for my character,
is the issue of unconditional love.”
Matthew Weeden

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lifeboat
Beautiful Soul
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Joined: January 20, 2007, 4:27 pm
Location: Southern England

Post by lifeboat » August 23, 2014, 12:08 am

and also prompted me:

Trust is
A drawbridge
across which hordes
of hostile troops can storm
to rape pillage and plunder your soul.

Yet trust is the only route to flee from
eternal isolation into fulfilment,
our only hope to discover
unconditional love in
all its splendour

STAReye
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Joined: December 20, 2009, 8:17 pm
Location: Brampton,Ontario CA

Post by STAReye » September 30, 2014, 9:45 pm

So happy that this poem elicited such beautiful write from both of you, Janice and lifeboat. God Bless.

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