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Fall Leaves

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STAReye
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Location: Brampton,Ontario CA

Post by STAReye » September 30, 2014, 9:49 pm

Not anymore hanging on a limb
fluttering in the wind.
There is this emptiness that is
becoming bothersome to the mind
as they leave their abode. They leave
limbs languid and naked as the sun.
Little by little cold air bruises their
veined feature, chilling flesh; their
colours imbue a rustic gold and bronze.
A delight to the squinting eyes roaming
parks and country side. In a quiet moment
they unhinge themselves flamboyantly,
slowly beckoning to earth’s yielding call.
Without any finicky human touch they
nest a soft bedrock, tender and inviting.
They let me sit in yoga trance, with nostrils
ocean-wide, breathing organic air. Soon
the mind will permeate the body with renewed
energy as the fall season unleashes its charm.

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lifeboat
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Joined: January 20, 2007, 4:27 pm
Location: Southern England

Post by lifeboat » October 1, 2014, 6:26 am

Wow, and double wow...
An absolutely awesome write..
Thank you

mwzephyr
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Joined: April 21, 2009, 6:25 am

Post by mwzephyr » October 1, 2014, 7:43 pm

Very nice poem. Thank you!
~Zep

Davidf
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Joined: January 22, 2010, 4:41 pm
Location: Islandia, NY

Post by Davidf » October 2, 2014, 1:39 pm

Leonard,
An absolutely beautiful write. Good job!
~Davidf
Have a blessed day!

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