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In your orbit

They say a poem's not really a poem until you share it with someone else. And that's what this place is all about.
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Liebestraum
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Post by Liebestraum » January 20, 2015, 5:55 am

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Flying couple by Alijan Alijanpour

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In your orbit

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At twilight time
I walked down the hill
touching the grass
in dreamlike lightness.
Nature alone echoed
the tune of my heart.

Suddenly your hand
touched my shoulder.
I fell out of rhythm
but you smiled and asked
“Can I have this dance?”
My quivering smile said yes
and the world closed in over us.

Our eyes locked
magic took hold of our feet,
mine followed yours.
No math was required,
magnets know by heart every move.
Stars exploded around us
single sparks sizzled
within our core.

We were pure grace
pointing to the sky,
a flock of birds
moving in perfect harmony
across the indigo space.
No words no whispers,
just dancing soul vibes
within bodies orbiting
around the same sun.



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Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love.
(Rumi)

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lifeboat
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Post by lifeboat » January 20, 2015, 8:09 am

I love the innocence and wonder of this.......

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Post by Davidf » January 21, 2015, 6:08 am

Margherita,
This is simply beautiful! Well said!
~Davidf
Have a blessed day!

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Liebestraum
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Post by Liebestraum » January 21, 2015, 2:30 pm

Thank you so much, dear Peter and dear David, for your kind appreciation. :)

Love,
Margherita :)
Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love.
(Rumi)

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Post by mwzephyr » January 24, 2015, 4:13 pm

Margherita,
I just love this!
~Zep

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Lion~*
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Post by Lion~* » January 25, 2015, 2:28 pm

I always love your gorgeous way of expression!
Most beautiful ((( Margherita)))
Fill your paper with the breathings of your heart...William Wordsworth

Follow your honest convictions, and stay strong. - William Thackeray

The bottom line, especially for my character,
is the issue of unconditional love.”
Matthew Weeden

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Ron Atchison
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Post by Ron Atchison » January 29, 2015, 9:50 pm

This was so lovely, I had to read it twice. Thank you Margherita! ;-)

~ Ron

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Liebestraum
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Post by Liebestraum » March 31, 2015, 1:57 pm

My dear friends, Zep, Janice and Ron, I so much enjoyed your loving comments. Thank you from my heart.

Love,
Margherita
Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love.
(Rumi)

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