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inspired by the movie -The Four Feathers

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Post by mwzephyr » March 25, 2015, 4:48 pm

WHY do you care? He responds ... Because God set you on my path.
Four White Feathers

Be it the waves of cowardice,
or the waves of remorse,
or the waves of hope that speed these thoughts?

Though my fears have overcome me,
several times,
they have not driven me to desperation;
rather they have driven me back to my faith.

The long hard march
through the pain and suffering,
through the heat of the battles,
has burned the dross from my heart,
has made my soul resilient,
and my faith the rock I stand upon.

The bond of friendship
is the only lasting measure that redeems
the world through the storms;
for upon friendship is built trust,
and understanding,
and affection and even love...

The lubricity of forgiveness given without request
facilitates this bond.

This bond holds our souls together when the light appears extinguished,
when pride hardens our hearts,
and hope wavers in the harsh winds of indifference.

Like a seed that must be released from it's comfort,
from it's stasis,
and it's prison,
it must receive the release by the flame
and nourishment from the ashes of it's prison transmuted.
This flame lies small and still yet strong in our hearts,
unless we deign to willingly extinguish it.
No torment shall be worse than this prideful self-immolation
of the soul.
Even angels cry out if this occurs.

Though I fear and suffer,
I am made whole again…
I was not made without purpose
and the divine spark that was struck in my heart,
while unique,
comes from the same flame as yours,
and theirs…

If there be a valley,
then there must be a summit,
and to reach that summit,
we must tread step by step the path
to where the air is clear
and the vision is succinct.
When we have reached the summit,
we too shall know
how all shall dance and rejoice
on the head of a pin,
or on the tableau of the cosmos.

Though I may stumble,
and fall,
if I can get back up
I will and if I lose grasp of your hand,
I shall reach out for it again!

In my heart,
I know that the tears of pain
shall be replaced
by the tears
of Joy,
for you have
come back to me
and I to you…

No torment
shall spoil my heart
and no tantrum split asunder,
that which was ordained by our hearts;
before the test became

Say I,
have you heard my call?
I await an answer,
even unto death itself.

DRB 11/12/07

*Thank you Lion.

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Post by Lion~* » March 26, 2015, 9:54 am

That was such a great movie about the treachery , betrayal and honorable, loyal bond of love. Not all choose love... some envy.... some enliven life ... I may not remember it perfectly word for word. but my favorite lines... * Why do you care?* * I care because God set you in my path!* I've felt that way and even when people are off upon another path .... I still care.

Great poem you wrote, David. Thanks for sharing it!

Fill your paper with the breathings of your heart...William Wordsworth

Follow your honest convictions, and stay strong. - William Thackeray

The bottom line, especially for my character,
is the issue of unconditional love.”
Matthew Weeden

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Post by Liebestraum » March 31, 2015, 2:09 pm

I have not seen this movie, but I sure appreciate your wonderful poem inspired by it. It is a great write really that encompasses many emotions ... and it is uplifting.

Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love.

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