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The air was full of you

Posted: May 14, 2015, 4:17 am
by Liebestraum


The air was full of you


In the instant
you raised your arms
to enfold my shoulders
my feet lost touch
with the ground.

You placed me
on a swing
and pushed me
into the current
of ascension.
I gathered speed
while the wind
got wild
with my hair
and sighed
into my ears.

I shed all my worries
and let them fly away,
in loose fragments
never to assemble again.
The air was full of you.
Your grace guided me
to the source
of your fragrance.

You kept me airborne
in those heights of
in the very center
of Love.

Just a moment in time
but you labelled it
with your name.
This song will dwell
within my core.

It will not fade
it is a duet now
played by
your heartstrings
and mine
out of time
in this present moment
of incorruptible beauty
which generates
only Love
in its most
brilliant colors.


the air

Posted: May 14, 2015, 5:23 am
by fredcowie
M: thanks, I needed that.......peace my friend, Fred

Posted: May 15, 2015, 12:29 am
by mwzephyr
This was elegant and moving. I am still tingling!
Thank you.

Posted: May 15, 2015, 9:04 am
by Ron Atchison
Oh my.... how beautiful is this! My heart could relate to every word... and the picture you included is perfect as well! Thank you dear Margherita. ;)

Posted: May 16, 2015, 2:34 pm
by Liebestraum
Dear Fred, dear David and dear Ron, I enjoyed your loving comments, thank you from my heart.

I have always associated being on a swing with a feeling of utter joy, freedom and happiness.

Margherita luv

RE: The air was full of you

Posted: May 21, 2015, 8:35 am
by jjbreunig3
A delightful piece; could sense the softness and lightness of your words, piercing my spirit with an upward lift; wonderfully conceived!

-Joe Breunig,
Author/poet, Reaching Towards His Unbounded Glory

Posted: May 21, 2015, 10:44 am
by Liebestraum
Thank you, dear Joe, for your very kind comment. I'm glad you felt the uplifting effect. :)


Posted: May 21, 2015, 2:43 pm
by Davidf
This poem was a great way to bring back memories. To this day, I still can't resist a swing when I see one.

Posted: May 22, 2015, 3:17 pm
by Liebestraum
Nor can I, dear David! But there are not so many around for adults! Thank you so much for your very kind comment.

Margherita :)

Posted: November 3, 2015, 5:54 pm
by flyingrabbit
Wow, you magically turned a simple thing to a very wonderful poem, Margherita!
I could really feel every part of your words, seemed like i was on a swing myself. oh i miss my childhood! :D

thanks for sharing this :)