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They say a poem's not really a poem until you share it with someone else. And that's what this place is all about.
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tiglibud
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Post by tiglibud » December 23, 2007, 2:41 am

Manipulating people everywhere,
Never Letting them see me CRY, WHY?
THINK!

THINK!

Think my personal PAIN,
Was, IS, will ...HAS ...Keeping me Sane?
Wasted my YOUTH!
Washed it away, VERMOUTH?

I settled for the MONEY,
HONEY!
In TIME...Walk, Walk, Walk...and RHYM!

Take YOUR test...TODAY?
In...GOD's name...What Way?

Don't second (2) GUESS FATE!
And...by GOD! Never ever show up LATE!

Wasted?
WASTED?
Wasted Attitude!

Prelude!

ONCE ...again ...A - Gain

TRYING TO KEEP OURSELVES SANE!

Once ...ONCE ...ONCE I SAY...

"Have Yourselves a Wonderful DAY!"

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Karolina blue
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Post by Karolina blue » December 23, 2007, 10:35 am

There is a depth to this. .the despair is felt through and through- - I can hear this being read aloud at an open mic making it even more powerful. Well done.

One can tell the voice in the poem is a survivor, and I believe that will and strength can eventually overcome the despair. .
"You know that place between sleep and awake, the place where you can still remember dreaming? That's where I'll always love you, Peter Pan. That's where I'll be waiting."

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Post by summerrain » January 4, 2008, 4:12 pm

i agree w/ karolina blue, that is indeed an open mic read. i can see these words being spoken very articulately & with much spunk of conviction. it was a pleasure reading your work tiglibud, you seem to have quite a way of expression & such an unique, creative flow.
kudos to you :cool:
Life is like a coin,
You can spend it any way you wish,
but you can spend it only once"

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